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INT. SUPERMARKET - NIGHT

In the fresh fruit isle there stands a man, he is clean shaven and clean cut as if he has just come from work, he stands with an orange in his hand

JOSH VO - It used to hit me like a wave, it would crash down on me and consume me but only for a few seconds then my head would burst of the water and gasp for air.

EXT. BUS STOP - NIGHT

A Hooded youth stands under a dimly lit bus stop waiting for a bus

CRAIG VO - It would be gone in a few seconds then I would be left feeling scared that something so powerful had controlled me for a second.

INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

I woman sits on her sofa next to her husband who is slumped down watching the tv, she sits upright and proper

JANE VO -  I had done my best to avoid drama and stress, but there is only so long you can run before it finds you.

EXT. STREET - NIGHT

A man stands dressed as a giant slice of pizza advertising a local take away

TOM VO -  I had shut it out for so long that when it came back it came with a vengeance.

INT. GYM - NIGHT

We see am man running on a treadmill, the sweat drips from his head but he ignores it as he concentrates on his goal

JOHN -  It wasn't waves crashing down on me anymore, I was consumed by a sea of anger.

INT. TRAFFIC JAM - NIGHT

Mike sits in his car a red break light shining on his face

MIKE VO - When it came I would almost lose control.

EXT. STREET - NIGHT

A street sweeper sweeps a quite city road

JIM VO - It was like I was clinging to the last bit of me inside hoping that I wouldn't let go and lose myself.

EXT. CITY STREET - NIGHT

A girl stands in amongst a crowd of moving people but she is still

LISA VO - But with the anger comes a strength that I have never felt before, it takes away the fear and clouds it with confidence and for a second I feel invincible.

INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

A late teenage boys lays on his bed starring up

BRET VO - Even when the anger leaves I can feel it, waiting for the smallest opportunity to arrive.

INT. OLD PEOPLES HOME - NIGHT

Judith sits in her chair smiling as she nits

JUDITH VO - Each day that goes by I want to control it less and less, I am curious, could it really be that bad?

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markkuczewski

Mark Kuczewski has directed and worked on many short films over the past few years many of witch are now making their way round the festival circuit. Ready or Not has picked up awards for ‘Best thriller’ and the ‘No Limits Award’ as well as being screened at Eat our…

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